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Connect the lights over this city's landscape tonight
And shoot down the stars with our headlights
While a sky's canopy releases the heat,
Escaping from hot pavement on a summer evening

We're breathing, but not living
All along
There never was
and we turn up the music
Just to interrupt our thoughts
and we get lost

And it may be darkest before dawn,
But there's always calm before the storm

Along the road
Shadows bend and you catch a glimpse
A perfect image looking back at you in the window
Rain drops streaming the side
And black roads are illuminated
Set in a motion
A night becomes perfect
©2008-2009 ~turpentinekiss0486
:iconturpentinekiss0486:

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Love hot summer nights...

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:iconthemusicalgargoyle:
I love the scene this sets. I can imagine being there. And I love poems that express so much without overcrowding, it's simplicity is great. I especially love the third stanza. Awesome!

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the Musical Gargoyle.
:iconapatheticsincerity:
love this!

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"You always were the most perplexing individual I had ever met..."
-K.N.B-

"quite frankly, and excuse the expression (lack for a better word), you can be a royal bitch."
-K.M.H-
:iconzarathustras-crown:
This is gorgeous...it reminds me of a Christopher Dewdney piece sort of...very cool...

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda
:iconturpentinekiss0486:
Thanks!! :)

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"On a long enough time line, the survival rate for everyone will drop to zero."
:iconturpentinekiss0486:
Thank you!

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"On a long enough time line, the survival rate for everyone will drop to zero."
:iconturpentinekiss0486:
:-D

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"On a long enough time line, the survival rate for everyone will drop to zero."
:iconzarathustras-crown:
Anytime...anything that reminds me of Dewdney is good in my book :D

--
Andrew Hussey

"For a sorcerer, reality, or the world we all know, is only a description that has been pounded into you from the moment you were born."

-Carlos Castaneda

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